Davidgotskill's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sourcream 2]

Yay! First Comment!

Nice Song, i personally dont like the video game leads but the drums tuned me in a bit. It sounds like the leads' volume is at the peak of the master if u know what i mean. They seem a little messy but i like the drums.
The track, too random in the drop and weird vocals.

Guys dont think im a hater when u see this. This is actually helping the person because its corrective criticism.

Positive thoughts:

Off the charts in the arrangement! Very well put together and arranged. As far as sound design, needs work but awesome for a video game song.

That's all i have. I am a piano player so my creative juices flow but i most of the time can't write my own song. I only have what came with M-Audio Oxygen 49 and it includes Ableton Live Lite, Twist (Which is too dark in its sound) by SONiVOX, and Xpand! by AIR Music Technology.

Hope this helped. I suggest you try Hard House or Future Bass. Those two are my favorite and i like how some blend together. Foreverbound is changing his style into House and Dubstep and i liked how it worked for him.

Wish the best for you AeronMusic and the rest out there,

Davidgotskill

AeronMusic responds:

Yeah I can understand why the drop can sound too random with the those weird vocals. I personally like it sounding that chaotic, so that is why. It actually is some flaw in my music style and I hear it from more people. I'll shall do my best and change that in the future.
And yes I will produce Hard House (or Complextro) and Future Bass more often. As you may have noticed I will put AeronMusic on hold, so I hope you'll follow my other alias here: https://soundcloud.com/everflux

Thanks a lot for your feedback David! (:

[Walking In Darkness - System Overload (Remix)]

ForeverBound. This rocks. Especially coming out of a regular slow style. One thing. I think you should try looking into harder house and trap. For example, Jay Hardway/ Martin Garrix/ Xtrullor (Newgrounds). Hope that helped! You did a good drop for first try. Nice job for first songs like that. I know it's a bit of a transition. I would just look also in the Electro House/ Hard House type genre.

[Euphoria]

Hey Foreverbound! Nice that your trying different styles. I also suggest you try a fast song like 140 or 145 BPM song and also try 128 which I love. If I don't make something worth sharing, I try 140 BPM

[Xtrullor - Birth of the Sun]

Not your best at all. It seems very well arranged, but I just don't like most of it. Too long orchestral parts and it doesn't go well together. I'm just putting corrective critisism on you. No offense to you but I think this could be a bit better designed.

[Zyzyx - Bubbles]

Not my style of Tobu. I like Martin Garrix and Jay Hardway. I dont like dreamy themes but for a dreamy theme and electro house together is good. Just based on my genre. Electro house is my favorite genre

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

I like all the genres of house, but I prefer electro house yeah