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Yay! First Comment!

Nice Song, i personally dont like the video game leads but the drums tuned me in a bit. It sounds like the leads' volume is at the peak of the master if u know what i mean. They seem a little messy but i like the drums.
The track, too random in the drop and weird vocals.

Guys dont think im a hater when u see this. This is actually helping the person because its corrective criticism.

Positive thoughts:

Off the charts in the arrangement! Very well put together and arranged. As far as sound design, needs work but awesome for a video game song.

That's all i have. I am a piano player so my creative juices flow but i most of the time can't write my own song. I only have what came with M-Audio Oxygen 49 and it includes Ableton Live Lite, Twist (Which is too dark in its sound) by SONiVOX, and Xpand! by AIR Music Technology.

Hope this helped. I suggest you try Hard House or Future Bass. Those two are my favorite and i like how some blend together. Foreverbound is changing his style into House and Dubstep and i liked how it worked for him.

Wish the best for you AeronMusic and the rest out there,

Davidgotskill

AeronMusic responds:

Yeah I can understand why the drop can sound too random with the those weird vocals. I personally like it sounding that chaotic, so that is why. It actually is some flaw in my music style and I hear it from more people. I'll shall do my best and change that in the future.
And yes I will produce Hard House (or Complextro) and Future Bass more often. As you may have noticed I will put AeronMusic on hold, so I hope you'll follow my other alias here: https://soundcloud.com/everflux

Thanks a lot for your feedback David! (:

Did u use Auxy Music Studio? Or Auxy Music Creation? Sounds like Auxy music creation. Creation is less updated than Auxy music studio. Well done and the title goes along with the song. Nice!

DPZ0 responds:

No, I'm using Auxy Studio. I didn't even know the other one existed.

ForeverBound. This rocks. Especially coming out of a regular slow style. One thing. I think you should try looking into harder house and trap. For example, Jay Hardway/ Martin Garrix/ Xtrullor (Newgrounds). Hope that helped! You did a good drop for first try. Nice job for first songs like that. I know it's a bit of a transition. I would just look also in the Electro House/ Hard House type genre.

Hey Foreverbound! Nice that your trying different styles. I also suggest you try a fast song like 140 or 145 BPM song and also try 128 which I love. If I don't make something worth sharing, I try 140 BPM

Not your best at all. It seems very well arranged, but I just don't like most of it. Too long orchestral parts and it doesn't go well together. I'm just putting corrective critisism on you. No offense to you but I think this could be a bit better designed.

Sick loops you used. I see u used some or all loops here

DPZ0 responds:

Pretty much

Not my style of Tobu. I like Martin Garrix and Jay Hardway. I dont like dreamy themes but for a dreamy theme and electro house together is good. Just based on my genre. Electro house is my favorite genre

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

I like all the genres of house, but I prefer electro house yeah

I think you need more depth into your songs. Try getting WA Production Packs to see how stuff gets put together and mastered. They master, sell samples, make free ones all the time, and just made a 273K Free Pack. It's awesome

Sounds like a menu theme. Needs some depth

FL or GarageBand?

DPZ0 responds:

GarageBand

I am David, a beginning music producer from Florida, U.S.A. This is not my career yet, so i am also improving in piano and baseball. I am creating Electronic Dance Music and i am looking forward to seeing where this takes me.

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